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We are Teenagers

Hands in the pocket, with the headphones on
Chilling out, playing pranks
"Kid! Are your senses gone?!
-Ah, Troublesome teens!"

T roublesome
   E nergetic
      E ducated?
 Gen - N ext
               A ll the
                   G uys and girls,
                       E verything we
                           'R'
                              is S exy!
Fast food all the way,
bu' 26 waist-size that must stay
eight pack, biceps and the rest
"Epic", "Awesome" kicks out "the best"

Haircuts, highlights-Red, blue, gold
Tattoos and piercings-"Oh! So bold!"
And Spikes and Faux-hawks the gel must hold.

Painted nails, boring emails
Online we go- TTYL, ROFL, LMFAO
Virtual reality? –"True Story bro!" #trollface

Geeks studying, chics partyin'
B-boys, playboys, roses and guns
We ain't spoilt teens,
just wanna be Everything at Once!

Engines rev after six
Bikes, cars and cool tricks
Adrenaline rush-Here we go!
Our Attitude-Awesome without 'me' is just Aweso'
They say "Why me?"
We say "Try Me!"
for We act , we protest
We take Life to be an adventurous test.
We raise voices, we make our own choices!

We are honest, we are cool
Heck yeah! Teenagers rule!
I thought a long time for this.....I'm a teenager too, and i've not experienced half of what i wrote. It's just my idea of a perfect teen and an idea to the adults that teens wanna be everything at once and that they are the future. I hope everyone enjoys this!

P.S Oh yeah, I'm thinking of coming up with a tune to this one. I don't know if it can make a good song

And yeah! The WONDERFUL preview image is by the amazingly multi-talented artist, ~Vive-Le-Rock Here's a direct link to her gallery [link]
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smile1873 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe awesome :D XD
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gee thank you! xD
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smile1873 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am a dummy! 
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Ari-Heart-Matsuri Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome! Really nice to hear something realistic about teens :P
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BigTuna723 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
Realistic? not in this reality.
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Ari-Heart-Matsuri Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What cha tryna say?
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BigTuna723 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Drugs, violence, and hate sounds a lot more real to me
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Ari-Heart-Matsuri Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Have you ever even met a human being? Teens like us do do stupid things, but only because we're young + Hardly any do do that kind of stuff for more than a year or two, unless they have actual health/mental health problems.
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much for appreciating my poem. I really means a lot to me!! Yes, my intention was to throw light on the good qualities of today's teens!
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Ari-Heart-Matsuri Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:P Goood.
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe ^_^
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Ari-Heart-Matsuri Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm weird. :D
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm with you. This is the typical teenager, but I couldn't relate to more than half of this. I've never really been typical, but I do really love your style of writing, regardless.:D
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well yes. I thought i'd write for teh fun of it!! I sriously wanna experience a li'l of it at least and above all, sometimes acc. to me, poetry shows what many people wanna feel too! <3
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Meh, I'm fine without most of that. There are so many things much more enjoyable in life.:aww:
And I appreciate how appropriate your poems are. No foul explicative language, no drugs, no alcohol or anything like that. Unfortunately, that's a BIG part of being a teenager. Here in America, anyway. I don't know if it's different over there. I know that teenagers certainly aren't honest over here.
Poetry definitely does that, too.:aww:
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no no they aren't. They kinda like to argue or more like debate over stuff. Because most of the stuff adults say except teh wavering mind swings, we ain't so un dependable. Well yeah, not heavy drugs no not here in teh city where i live in. But steroids, yeah. teens here are obsessed of being tall.
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
See, over here, most teen guys like to fight and do heavy drugs. The girls like to back-stab, gossip, and swirl drama.
There are some exceptions, that's just the norm. I personally don't have any interest in alcohol, smoking, or anything like that. But I'm really unique anyway.:aww:
It's good that teens over there are fairly dependable. I think my friends are some of the few trustworthy teens in my entire city.
Obsessed with being tall? Well, teens over here do put a lot into height. It's never been a problem with me. I've always been in the 95% and above of my age with height.
Uh, steroids. I'm sure there's plenty of that around here, too, but it's not the main problems.
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! that's sad. But i guess we should take care of ourselves and keep ourselves clean! ^_^
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a song!? I love it!!!!
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! i'm glad you did :icononionloveplz: Yep! It is a song...i'm coming up with the tune...My first ever try at lyrics! xD
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
God, I love it!
I hope I get to hear it sometime?
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah sure! I'll work on it durin' my summer break like in the month of march! xD
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AnnieBird Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!! Can't wait~
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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XsilverghostX Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Teenagers i see act so stupid but i guess there are some exceptions......very few exceptions XD
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe....well, I'm happy you realized that xD
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YautjaVasquez Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Hicks mod on
Hey man, look, I am a teenager, but I feel like an adult, and it only because I like some stuff from 70´s and 80´s.
It ain´t fair.
awesome song
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for liking my song!
Hey, You feel like an adult? That's cool ain't it? So you already feel you're legal? :icononionxdplz: If it's bcuz u like some stuff from the 70s, it ain't nothing to feel odd about, Many teens love stuff from the 70s! Infact, The ol' Chevrolet Impala, A model of '69 is the coolest drive a teen could ever dream to own!!! And hey, the stuff from the 70s are back n rollin, hairstyles, colors, apparel everything! oooh! I should write another poem on this subject! xD so yeah...you are indeed a teenager. :iconmonkeyconfidentplz:
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YautjaVasquez Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
I was thinking about vietnam war, Alien, The Doors, The Rolling Stones, ... And of course the 80's.
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NagaChelsi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wrong the Vietnam war was in the 60's same with the Stones. Try to get your dates right next time okay?
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YautjaVasquez Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Ending of Vietnam war...The last 5 years 70-75 Sorry bout zee stones
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NagaChelsi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay. I'm just a bit anal about dates and times. (is a history geek)
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YautjaVasquez Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
I understand her perfectly
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NagaChelsi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh. Good.
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