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Your touch,
My heart skips a beat, like a skipping stone,
It's a rush.
Your smile,
It's like moonlight. To fade away,
it takes a  word that's longer than a while
Your laugh
sweet as the sound of a chime
like the words of a poem that rhyme.
your lips,
like soft rose petals. I'm taking dips
in the ocean of your talk.
I'm lost
when you walk that walk.
Your look,
freezes time, oh, I can write a book.
You're just,
the only one I see now.
I've tried this new style of poetry...Just something that was ringing in my mind. Thought I would pen it. Hope you guys can relate. I'm happy that this poem is not centered on a specific person, i could make it through the view point of either a girl or a guy. Oh, I hope you guys can relate and enjoy it.

Happy reading!

Peace \m/

The thumbnail that speaks the poem is done by the amazing Zindy. Here have a look!
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Skyilere Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  New member
the picture is done lovely.
The poem didn't really rhyme a lot,but it's still fabulous! 
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like the style.:aww:
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!! i think i'll write one more of this style but this kinda was created thru' this poem. So i'm happy with the result and i wish i'd write one more of this style!
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The pattern and style reminds me of a few Linkin' Park songs. Especially the way their song "Numb" starts off. I had a similar tune going through my head when reading this.:aww:
Although this piece has more of a cheerful tone than LP's music.:D
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ha! Numb! one of teh bests from LP i've been addicted to living things. i'm listening to the same songs for over a month can you believe that? :O Well I'm so so soooooooooooo pleased to hear taht this poem resembles tunes of LP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Jumps in air in joy* BECUASE LP IS MOTHER OF GOD!!!
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KyceSilverFalcon Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, that's not so bad. I've got a playlist of about 80 or so songs that I listen to on repeat and shuffle all the time for the past year, I think. I just keep adding to it. Most of it isn't English, either.:D
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG! wow!
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XsilverghostX Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wish i knew what this was like,but i guess i'll see someday :D Such a beautiful work
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! xD Oh of course you will! <3
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epicShadowdragon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much! xD
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epicShadowdragon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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Kurotamashi13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Totally awesome.
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!
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nacho36 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the drawing! Very purdy!
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
All thanks to the artist Zindy! :D
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ChaosChorus Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
i Really like dis poem
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
It is a refreshing drink of water after all of the other works here that cover the same topic. Great job.
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! ^^
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
You are very welcome!
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