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Wrath~
Deceived, confused and abandoned;
A state that cannot be mended.
He stood there looking into his past, he then closed his eyes,
saw his big brother walk right into his demise.
"Such a selfish act to be carried out by my selfless big brother? So unfair!!!
Written off, forgotten, why didn't anybody care?”
Hatred ran through his veins,
Anger and despair tied his heart in chains.
His heart rusted and was soon as cold as winter,
Rage took over and turned him into a sinner!
He sliced and destroyed everything in his way,
He caused bloodshed and sorrow, night and day!
As he saw his sword dripping blood,
He also saw his eyes burning in flames
Of hatred, vengeance, It has many names
But for a person who chooses this path,
He destroys himself, and so.... he is named Wrath.
Deceived, confused and abandoned;
A state that cannot be mended.
He stood there looking into his past, he then closed his eyes,
saw his big brother walk right into his demise.
"Such a selfish act to be carried out by my selfless big brother? So unfair!!!
Written off, forgotten, why didn't anybody care?”
Hatred ran through his veins,
Anger and despair tied his heart in chains.
His heart rusted and was soon as cold as winter,
Rage took over and turned him into a sinner!
He sliced and destroyed everything in his way,
He caused bloodshed and sorrow, night and day!
As he saw his sword dripping blood,
He also saw his eyes burning in flames
Of hatred, vengeance, It has many names
But for a person who chooses this path,
He destroys himself, and so.... he is named Wrath.
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The Second of my series: The Seven Deadly Sins. The previous one being: 
Tell me what you think!! please feel free to critique and yeah about the preview image, it's drawn by me ^_^ I drew sasuke becuz he just fit into this so nicely. Yes, i got inspired from Sasuke's story. ^_^ here's the devaition: 
For Past and Present Contest
. I was enthralled when i saw how deep vengeance can go. And hence is the theme to my poem. I was inspired by the story of the fictional character Sasuke Uchiha From Naruto. Of course, i gave my own ending to the story because that's where vengeance leads you.
Well, wish me luck in the contest!
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Tell me what you think!! please feel free to critique and yeah about the preview image, it's drawn by me ^_^ I drew sasuke becuz he just fit into this so nicely. Yes, i got inspired from Sasuke's story. ^_^ here's the devaition: For Past and Present Contest
. I was enthralled when i saw how deep vengeance can go. And hence is the theme to my poem. I was inspired by the story of the fictional character Sasuke Uchiha From Naruto. Of course, i gave my own ending to the story because that's where vengeance leads you. Well, wish me luck in the contest!
Follow me on <a href = "[link]">Facebook!
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI love the drawing of Sasuke bec I knwwhat he was actually going through. And his character fits the scene perfectly. The selection below it however was well written but very immature in places. Like a kid using big words. Although they were very well placed. A couple words ofadvice. At the end I don't suggest you repeat that It's about wrath. It kind ofis a filler sentence.
Ugh I hate this moment when I have notng else to say but DA makes me write more xD Great piece though(: So random letters. jaskdfjklasjlfjkasd ajskld ajsdfk asjdfk lkjf asdjfk lkjfd